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Started by Solomon Zorn, September 15, 2013, 02:32:56 AM

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KUSA

#90
There once was a man from Nantucket,
Whose dick was so long he could suck it.
Said he, with a grin,
As he wiped off his chin,
"If my ear were a cunt, I could fuck it!"

Solomon Zorn

#91
OK, here's my latest. It doesn't have the same bite as some of my better stuff. I think I might be losing my edge.

Faith Healer
http://www.solomonzorn.com/faith-healer.html
If God Exists, Why Does He Pretend Not to Exist?
Poetry and Proverbs of the Uneducated Hick

http://www.solomonzorn.com

Mr.Obvious

I dunno SZ, I liked it. Might not be 'edgy', but sure is entertaining.
"If we have to go down, we go down together!"
- Your mum, last night, requesting 69.

Atheist Mantis does not pray.

Solomon Zorn

Here's another example of losing my edge:

A Particle
Solomon Zorn


I am a particle
Just a very tiny speck
In a vast universe
Of particles

I am a particle
Like all particles
I am composed of
Smaller particles

I am a particle
With unique properties
I can choose
I open and close the gate

I am a particle
Directing it's own motion
And directing the motion
Of other particles

I am a particle
In a group of particles
We interact
Forming complex systems

I am a particle
Responding to other particles
And assigning value
To those particles

I am a particle
Trading particles
With other particles
In need of a particle

I am a particle
Experiencing
The nature of being
A particle
If God Exists, Why Does He Pretend Not to Exist?
Poetry and Proverbs of the Uneducated Hick

http://www.solomonzorn.com

Brian37

I have never been a fan of telling others how poetry should be written. Art is simply that which works. I have read so much in my life of others and even seen people love some of mine that I didn't think was that special. To tell another poet how to write is to put shackles on them.
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers." Obama
Poetry By Brian37 Like my poetry on Facebook Under BrianJames Rational Poet and also at twitter under Brianrrs37

Brian37

Mendacity, By Brian37(Originally posted at Rational Responders.com



The enticing  falsehood

Drenched  in delusion

Self inflicted

From false perceptions



That angel is no angel

That hero is no hero

It is you lying to yourself

In want of the non-existent



The scourge of thought

To be complacent

With mere emotion

With mere tradition



You are not

Looking for evidence

You are looking for

Excuses



Excuses to cling

To empty claims

Too afraid

To self examine



So you lie

To yourself

And in turn

Lie to others

"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers." Obama
Poetry By Brian37 Like my poetry on Facebook Under BrianJames Rational Poet and also at twitter under Brianrrs37

KUSA


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Brian37

What Happens In Vegas, By Brian37

When Dawkins spoke
Of meme theory
Upon the first time
Hearing about it

I scoffed
But be the issue
Religion or guns
Ideas and ideology sell

Why did this couple
Shout "Revolution"
Why did 9/11 happen
Why do they murder abortion doctors

Because marketing works
Play off of fear or vanity
Sell a utopia
In an imperfect world

Humans will futilely
Fight for Plato's essence
At the cost
Of compassion

Those evil cops
Simply eating pizza
Deserved to die
They were the bullies

Yes, the bullies
We trained collectively
To fear the worst
We are responsible

Absurd to expect
As some do
They should fight crime
With pea shooters

When we have A-R 15s
When 45s and Glocks
Infest every home
Made like Skittles

And you assholes
Have the nerve
To be shocked
At the body count

Have the nerve
To be paranoid
Of how well armed
Law enforcement is

When you yourself
Like a petulant child
Think Dirty Harry
Is Constitutional documentary

Your high capacity phallus
Does not impress us
Your deadly selfish
We've had enough of

These are not the days of muskets
You are no one's hero
If all you want to do
Is live in a bubble, concerned only with yourself
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers." Obama
Poetry By Brian37 Like my poetry on Facebook Under BrianJames Rational Poet and also at twitter under Brianrrs37

Solomon Zorn

"High capacity phallus!" Excellent! :grin:
If God Exists, Why Does He Pretend Not to Exist?
Poetry and Proverbs of the Uneducated Hick

http://www.solomonzorn.com

NinjaRisu

I wrote this poem waayyy back in high school.


Darkness, lust, tormented by the sight,
Blood, love, killed by the light.
Hatred, death, feelings going no where.
Killing, fate, love that's not fair.
My cage is small and cold,
Aging feeling old.
Please let me be free,
Let loose my mind and you will see.
What it's like to be me.
Let loose my soul that you have caged,
Old and battered but never aged.


Brian37

"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers." Obama
Poetry By Brian37 Like my poetry on Facebook Under BrianJames Rational Poet and also at twitter under Brianrrs37

Nam

I wrote this 8 years ago and still pisses some people off. I have no idea why. It's a love story...

[Spoiler]

99 bottles of love on the wall

scripture told me to love
and like a good s.o.b
I did what jesus told me
I loved many girls each night
they were like
individually wrapped
acid trips
sweat and cum made
the sheets warm and cozy
the lights were pretty
like disco balls in studio 69
and when I grew tired
I'd lay there and dream
of heaven while being raped
by the love of a woman
while I slept

I'd see jesus in front of me
and he'd tell me to get
undressed and I would call him
a fag and say I didn't swing
that way
but
it was jesus
if I didn't swing perhaps
I'd go to hell
so I undressed and
woke up to a guy
sucking my cock
it felt strangely fine
and I let it happen

jesus wanted it to happen

the nights were abstract
the stars seemed to move
like spaceships
we wanted to go home
and we cried out loud
for them to rescue us
from a world at war with itself

vietnam was waking us up to love
yet our government was killing
us

I burnt a flag on capitol hill
and got beaten with a club
by some pansy cop who looked
like he was the re-incarnated
jesus who went down on me
that other night

I've been photographed in incense
and burned as a god
yet the god I am is the god they are
and there's nothing more
I can do but hope that life's
more than a re-occurring trip
and not held in the palm of a white man
who calls himself a leader

true leaders don't send young men and women
to die in a battle
that they obviously will not come back from
and if they do
they won't be whole
they won't
be innocent anymore

they'll be fucked and raped
like a little girl
finding out her daddy hates her

I've seen more on tv
than what they show
or perhaps
it's all just a show
and we are the puppets
waiting for our strings
to be cut
or for us to cut
them
ourselves

give me a gun
I'll assassinate Kennedy
just so I can dream of
not being drafted
dream of being fucked
by many women
know that jesus loves me
dance in a crowd
and see better stars
at night




David Garrett Arnold
May 16 2006
[/spoiler]

:-)

-Nam
Mad cow disease...it's not just for cows, or the mad!

Brian37

Submit, By Brian37

If the other tribe
Would just do so
If my women
Would just do so

My liberal brethren
So well intended
Lending cover
To the literalists

My qualm with you
Is your ignorance
That they read
The same words you do

Your kindness does show
And you know
Other labels
Can be kind too

Still not my point
Or argument
About any of
Your good intent

You skip some parts
Like they do too
And with the same god
Come to different conclusions

There is a source
As to which
Female cattle
They are treated

There is a source
Whence violence arises
And use words in a book
To thus justify

The violent ones
Are getting it right
Because back then
You defended your tribe

Back then
You obeyed the king
You dared not
Step out of line

Back then
Vaginas were fields
Men gave the seed
Girls were crops

The words in those books
Are hardly modern
Having nothing to do
With secular pluralism

The only peace
Holy books sell
Is peace through submission
Or burn in hell


"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers." Obama
Poetry By Brian37 Like my poetry on Facebook Under BrianJames Rational Poet and also at twitter under Brianrrs37

Nam

an imperfection of art

a dream can show you lies
sorrowful good-byes
  from the woman you wish to forget
it can show you happiness
gentle waves of bliss
  yet seemingly poorly lit

still ..

it's worth to note
in each thought rote
  this woman you wish to forget
is that gentle wave of bliss
that shows you happiness
  and makes your heart offset

and ..

I know it could be true
this woman who is you
  is the one who holds my heart
a ring upon a finger
a soul that could linger
  an imperfection of art

I ..

could believe in this dream
an impossible scheme
  for you to marry me
yet there's more than you and I
in each tear that is cried
  from every touch that we breathe

still ..

a dream can show you lies
a glisten in one's eye
  a soul that seems offset
each beat of my heart
that won't stop 'til it starts
  from the woman I wish to forget



David Garrett Arnold
January 16 2009


-Nam
Mad cow disease...it's not just for cows, or the mad!

Hijiri Byakuren

Not helping in Africa

preventing mishap,

Almighty God

is watching you fap.
Speak when you have something to say, not when you have to say something.

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